Over at Ticonderoga Online,
punkrocker1991 muses in his editorial about the state of modern SF writing in Oz.
"Yes, we're publishing more, but is our writing getting better?
I'm not convinced."
Healthier, he says, but not stronger.
(Also, he mentions my name. I wish he wouldn't do that, it makes it harder to quote him without appearing self-involved, even when he's not particularly flattering me.)
Firstly, I'm not well read enough to know if Russ is correct about more 'gems' appearing ten years ago, but I like his honesty & his willingness to cast a critical eye on what's around him -- without rancour.
I wonder whether the proliferation of short story markets means people are resting on their laurels. Does an increase in opportunity for publishing necessarily equate to a decrease in quality? Is 'diversity' the same as 'some of these fail some basic tests of robustness, but we had spare pages so here they are'? Has complacency crept into our approach to writing? Do we say, 'oh, somebody will pick this up, it's OK, I'll stop there & go do something else'?
For me, no. I'm still surprised when someone agrees to publish my stuff. I prefer the writing of many other authors to my own. I am aware my stories are flawed in ways I can't spot when I think I'm done with them. They're limited by my own limitations, by the fact I write too slowly (write a little, rest a little, write a little...) & the fact I'm just plain lazy. I want writing to be easier. I'm always slightly annoyed when it isn't. But I still try, because it's embarrassing to have my flawed little monstrosities limping through the world with their jaws hanging loose and readers poking at them, testing their weaknesses. "See, this one has broken elbows!" In fact, it occurs to me that writing a story is much better than publishing a story. It's *publishing* that breaks a story, I'm sure.
Yes, friends, that last sentence was an example of self-indulgence.;)
I had a fun exchange with Shadowed Realms, where I kept threatening to give them something sub-standard for Issue 9 (femmes fatales) to see what euphemism they'd come up with for 'rejected', & they kept threatening me with spiders. And finally Angela Challis called my bluff. 'You couldn't live with yourself,' she suggested, and she was right. When I send sub-standard stuff to an editor, I do it out of ignorance, not arrogance. I couldn't do it knowingly.
Doesn't mean I can't *unknowingly* send something sub-standard, of course. Mwahahah-- ... er ...
Would I try any harder if there were less markets available? No. I am still working at getting better. I am slow because I go over & over every damn story re-examining every damn word, worrying at it like the proverbial dog-with-bone. I must stop doing that. At times it drives me nuts, & I'm not sure it's helpful.
Stuck to my wall is a bunch of quotes, & one says:
'Write quickly & you will never write well. Write well & you will soon write quickly.'
--Marcus Fabius Quintilianus
How damn soon, that's what I want to know.
I digress. I would be working just as hard if all my stuff was being rejected, it's just that I would probably also be more annoyed with myself. Or maybe I would be just as annoyed with myself.
Yeah. Yeah, I'd probably be just as annoyed with myself.
But I would be less grateful to the editors & readers, & without the positive energy their kindness gives me, perhaps I would be trying a little less, & perhaps I would be giving up a little more.
I suspect what feeds writers is different to what feeds readers. I suspect we can't exactly reconcile quality reading material (for readers) with early validation (for writers).
But it's all in the trying, eh?
"Yes, we're publishing more, but is our writing getting better?
I'm not convinced."
Healthier, he says, but not stronger.
(Also, he mentions my name. I wish he wouldn't do that, it makes it harder to quote him without appearing self-involved, even when he's not particularly flattering me.)
Firstly, I'm not well read enough to know if Russ is correct about more 'gems' appearing ten years ago, but I like his honesty & his willingness to cast a critical eye on what's around him -- without rancour.
I wonder whether the proliferation of short story markets means people are resting on their laurels. Does an increase in opportunity for publishing necessarily equate to a decrease in quality? Is 'diversity' the same as 'some of these fail some basic tests of robustness, but we had spare pages so here they are'? Has complacency crept into our approach to writing? Do we say, 'oh, somebody will pick this up, it's OK, I'll stop there & go do something else'?
For me, no. I'm still surprised when someone agrees to publish my stuff. I prefer the writing of many other authors to my own. I am aware my stories are flawed in ways I can't spot when I think I'm done with them. They're limited by my own limitations, by the fact I write too slowly (write a little, rest a little, write a little...) & the fact I'm just plain lazy. I want writing to be easier. I'm always slightly annoyed when it isn't. But I still try, because it's embarrassing to have my flawed little monstrosities limping through the world with their jaws hanging loose and readers poking at them, testing their weaknesses. "See, this one has broken elbows!" In fact, it occurs to me that writing a story is much better than publishing a story. It's *publishing* that breaks a story, I'm sure.
Yes, friends, that last sentence was an example of self-indulgence.;)
I had a fun exchange with Shadowed Realms, where I kept threatening to give them something sub-standard for Issue 9 (femmes fatales) to see what euphemism they'd come up with for 'rejected', & they kept threatening me with spiders. And finally Angela Challis called my bluff. 'You couldn't live with yourself,' she suggested, and she was right. When I send sub-standard stuff to an editor, I do it out of ignorance, not arrogance. I couldn't do it knowingly.
Doesn't mean I can't *unknowingly* send something sub-standard, of course. Mwahahah-- ... er ...
Would I try any harder if there were less markets available? No. I am still working at getting better. I am slow because I go over & over every damn story re-examining every damn word, worrying at it like the proverbial dog-with-bone. I must stop doing that. At times it drives me nuts, & I'm not sure it's helpful.
Stuck to my wall is a bunch of quotes, & one says:
'Write quickly & you will never write well. Write well & you will soon write quickly.'
--Marcus Fabius Quintilianus
How damn soon, that's what I want to know.
I digress. I would be working just as hard if all my stuff was being rejected, it's just that I would probably also be more annoyed with myself. Or maybe I would be just as annoyed with myself.
Yeah. Yeah, I'd probably be just as annoyed with myself.
But I would be less grateful to the editors & readers, & without the positive energy their kindness gives me, perhaps I would be trying a little less, & perhaps I would be giving up a little more.
I suspect what feeds writers is different to what feeds readers. I suspect we can't exactly reconcile quality reading material (for readers) with early validation (for writers).
But it's all in the trying, eh?
- Watching & Reading:Tool


Comments
So we need to find a way, collectively, to drag in more readers.
Yes.
What do you mean by 'healthy' in your comment above? 'It's healthy to read each other's stuff'? Or something else?
Ask strangedave, he'll tell you. Altough he was drunk at the time, I think.
So was I. I wonder if I remembered to rant at him properly. Hmm.
Anyway. More audience. We await your example... :)
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* In case any other zine eds are offended by this, let me point out that Borderlands is not the best-best-promoted, nor is it the best-mostly-pretty-promoted, nor the best-entirely-forgotten-about zine. It is the best zine with the least promotion. Whose title begins with the letter 'B'.
I don't know though... you could be right...
My philosophy was kind of that, most people that read small press stuff are people that want to get published in it, and that the more places there are to get published, the more the small press audience will expand...
Mind you, I just made that theory up, i don't know if it's got any truth to it:)
Try this for size: Australians are publishing significantly more short fiction than 10 years ago; Ellen Datlow is listing more Australians in her Recommended lists at the back of her year's bests, but why isn't she reprinting significantly more australians in the business end of the book?
Of course,m if you ask me whether any Aussies are world class I might have a different answer, but it's fucking hard toi persuade someone tor ead your magazine when the editorial says "we don't publish any good stories any more, but here's two we did publish".....
You never know, Russ's editorial might have a reverse psychology effect on the whole world! Plus I kinda like opinions that irritate people. Gets 'em energised.
But I've been called 'perverse' before ...
And of Maloney, Blackford and Lawson: can you really say that the short fiction they are producing *now* is significantly better than 5, 10, 15 or, in Russell Blackford's case, 20 years ago?
Please go back and re-read the editorial and then have a look at your second paragraph.
good comeback...
1) there is still good work being published in Australia
2) Yes we are publishing more, but is the quality of writing overall getting better?
Against this it's easy to pick out some isolated examples, but how many of them are by writers whose first publication was in the last 5-10 years? And how does their work rate with benchmarks like Lucy Sussex's "My Lady Tongue"?
Hopefully, people went & checked out your editorial from the link I gave, because of course I included only two little sentences that appealed to me. Hope you don't mind.
Still, I enjoy debate, so this has been good fun. Thanks, Russ! :)
Now, I wasn't part of the scene ten years ago so I can't really comment, but I wonder whether part of it wasn't the fact that you were younger and had read less... I know personally there were more stories that I read that "stuck with me" when I was younger than there are now... I think the more experience you have with the genre the harder you become to impress...
i don't know whether the same is true for you...
as far as whether the quality is increasing overall...when you go from having very few venues to having a lot of venues for aspiring authors, I'd be very surprised if the overall ratio of quality stories compared to average or less-than-average stories didn't decrease... that seems likely...
However, it's possible that if all the "new" authors keep writing then they'll improve (and it's likely that if there are more venues they'll write more than if they were only shopping stories to two magazines with six-month turnarounds)... and so it's possible that in five or ten years we might see an improvement in the number of "great" stories...
I think you'd be crazy to expect an immediate jump in great stories being produced...
We're talking there about the majority of stories though...
If your argument is that the cream of the crop, the best stories, aren't as good as they were ten years ago, that's another matter... whether having less venues made authors try harder (as some have suggested) and therefore produce better work is a difficult argument... we'll never know how the career of Greg Egan or Sean Williams would have been differently if they'd emerged now... my suspicion is that they'd have produced equally good work, rather than resting on their laurels because it was easier to find publication... but that's just my suspicion...
Either way, good on you for raising debate...
I think people too often assume that if a story doesn't work it means the writer just couldn't be bothered... which comes back to intent... it's dangerous (IMHO) to ascribe motives to people when you read their work... "oh, they don't care anymore, they're just churning them out"... for all you know the author has put their heart and soul into it... it just didn't come through to the other side...
>it's dangerous (IMHO) to ascribe motives to people when you read their work<
Dangerous, but interesting, & often right in ways that are unsettling, I would say. We might not want to believe we're giving much of ourselves away when we write, but I think perhaps a little more of us leaks out than we're aware of. But this is scary thinking & I think I shall put it away for a time!
I believe there is a great crop of emerging writers breaking through. Clarion South showed me that.
But I agree with Russell wholeheartedly (well, the spirit of his musings, as I can't vouch for the numbers of Aussies published in international 'Year's Bests' like Ellen and co can).
I love Aussie fiction, I'm almost parochial about it, but to be blunt there is not a single work of fiction I've read in the last two years - not a single one - that I wouldn't have attacked with an editorial razor blade.
Deb said:
>'You couldn't live with yourself,' she suggested, and she was right.
>When I send sub-standard stuff to an editor, I do it out of
>ignorance, not arrogance. I couldn't do it knowingly.
I've learned this lesson as a writer myself. If only more writers took Deb's attitude, my position on this whole subject would be very different.
Shane
Oh, and I wouldn't have taken an editorial razor blade to 'Singing My Sister Down'.
>If only more writers took Deb's attitude, my position on this whole subject would be very different.<
Thankee. As an editor, you'd have a clearer idea of how much of this goes on than I would. Is there really a lot of it? When writers send you crummy stuff, is it an error of commission (ie. they know they're doing it & they're just smug) or omission (ie. they don't realise they're doing it)?
It just seems that a writing career is too fragile a thing to mess with that way. Too much hangs on reputation to risk it.
You're only as good as your last story, as they say.
Russell's piece made me really glad that I only write three short stories a year and that I am much more comfortable with novels and NF. If he read my stuff he might hate it and decide it is part of the 90% dross, but at least I can be pretty sure he isn't including the main part of my writing in that assessment. It is a bad message for emerging writers to announce: "You are average." And that is what it comes down to and there is this debate - so many of us saw ouselves in that commentary and it is easy enough to hate oneself in writing (rejection slips, yum!) without being told you are probably rather mediocre.
Having vented my spleen, my real thought is twofold. First, that editors can't be left out of the equation. Datlow and van Gelder and the others at the top of the highest mountain of editorial skill can't be counted unless we also count all the emerging editors who are editing all the material that is pouring out currently. And good editing is active - an outstanding editor sees the potential in a story and helps the writer bring out that potential. So experience and skill *count*.
I am trying to say that there are bunch of editors with less than ten years experience out there coaxing short stories into print. You can see most of them grow every time they bring out a new publication. It is wondrous to watch. It means, though, that the abundance of older and newer and just-out-of-the-factory fiction is seen by some people with amazing experience, a lot of people with some experience and an increasing number of people who are still on a very steep initial learning curve. Ask the question in ten years time when these editors have that depth of experience and then we will know more.
Time is important for another reason. This is my second coming in the Australian industry (I am Jewish, I am allowed a scond coming). My first was very small and shy, so no-one remembers me. At that time, too, new growth was budding and a bunch of Eeyores said "but this isn't good writing - we will always be sadly insular and local". Twenty something years on and we look back and see the emergence of a lot of seriously cool writers at that time, some of whom now have international standing. Back then everyone was saying "Maybe Damian Broderick counts as good - not really sure." Now we have all kinds of healthy respect for the Brodericks and the McMullens and other authors are saying "I should try the international market too." The new authors are getting published, too. Of CSFG members with books in print, 50% of us have been published in the US or UK and the other 50% in Australia.
I guess I am saying that we should not be judging ourslves now, but just working on geting better. In twenty something years time our judgement is going to be different anyhow. My hope is that in twenty something years time we see a whole bunch of the writers round now with serious respect from the commnity, and that not too many of us will have fallen by the wayside. I hope we will also see more of us join the Ikins and Gillespies and Blackmores and Brodericks in the various sorts of intellectual endeavour that really help underpin the writing side.
And I seriously, seriously hope that writers will make their own choices about where they belong, and totally ignore comments from above about their possible mediocrity. We can't know more than vaguely yet where we fit in the spectrum of talent - all we can know if people like our writing, if it gets published and if we keep learning and growing.
(Rant over: please queue nicely if you want to strangle me)
And in fact, ideas like Russell's just make me want to work harder, so I'm very glad he spoke up. I doubt he thinks we *can't* write gems, I think he's goading us to *do just that*! But editing & time are two very important tools to this...